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Post by Darkstorm Zero on Feb 7, 2015 7:27:00 GMT -5
It's interesting to see a merged work like this. I wonder how it meshes together. I'll read more of it first to see. You mean because it's a Crossover? Or because it's got a co-author? There are many Xovers in Fanfiction.net
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Post by The Big Daddy C-Master on Feb 7, 2015 7:28:52 GMT -5
It's interesting to see a merged work like this. I wonder how it meshes together. I'll read more of it first to see. You mean because it's a Crossover? Or because it's got a co-author? There are many Xovers in Fanfiction.net I was under the impression that you had a co-author working with you on this simultaneously. I was wondering how two people working on the same piece would mesh. That's what I was saying.
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Post by Darkstorm Zero on Feb 7, 2015 7:54:30 GMT -5
I was under the impression that you had a co-author working with you on this simultaneously. I was wondering how two people working on the same piece would mesh. That's what I was saying. Ah, I see what your saying. Well, it has been an adventure, I'll say that much Just agreeing to what the Dragonborn would look like has been a bit of a trial However, the overall plot is easier to chart as we are both fans of the game series, and the tv show Game of Thrones.
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Post by The Big Daddy C-Master on Feb 7, 2015 8:00:07 GMT -5
I was under the impression that you had a co-author working with you on this simultaneously. I was wondering how two people working on the same piece would mesh. That's what I was saying. Ah, I see what your saying. Well, it has been an adventure, I'll say that much Just agreeing to what the Dragonborn would look like has been a bit of a trial However, the overall plot is easier to chart as we are both fans of the game series, and the tv show Game of Thrones. I'm guessing the benefit is that you get the work done a lot faster, plus more ideas.
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Post by Darkstorm Zero on Feb 7, 2015 8:01:04 GMT -5
Indeed.
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Post by The Big Daddy C-Master on Feb 7, 2015 10:53:43 GMT -5
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Post by Darkstorm Zero on Feb 7, 2015 12:31:57 GMT -5
Well, he is a good friend, and a decent source of info. Plus he's a good editor.
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Post by The Big Daddy C-Master on Feb 7, 2015 12:48:29 GMT -5
Well, he is a good friend, and a decent source of info. Plus he's a good editor. Yea editors help you take your work to the next level.
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Post by Darkstorm Zero on Feb 8, 2015 4:31:48 GMT -5
Well, I did a sizable chunk of Chapter 1 last night.
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Post by The Big Daddy C-Master on Feb 8, 2015 5:21:04 GMT -5
Well, I did a sizable chunk of Chapter 1 last night. You're a fast mover...
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Post by Darkstorm Zero on Feb 8, 2015 5:24:41 GMT -5
Sometimes. I just needed some inspiration for the dream sequence.
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Post by The Big Daddy C-Master on Feb 8, 2015 6:08:58 GMT -5
Sometimes. I just needed some inspiration for the dream sequence. What do you have in mind?
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Post by Darkstorm Zero on Feb 8, 2015 12:58:47 GMT -5
What do you have in mind? Hm? For what?
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Post by The Big Daddy C-Master on Feb 8, 2015 17:18:41 GMT -5
For your dream sequence.
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Post by Darkstorm Zero on Feb 9, 2015 2:44:02 GMT -5
For your dream sequence. Oh, I already did that. It was the section in all italics.
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Post by The Big Daddy C-Master on Feb 9, 2015 2:46:55 GMT -5
I guess I misunderstood what you meant by needing inspiration then.
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Post by Darkstorm Zero on Feb 9, 2015 3:05:49 GMT -5
I guess I misunderstood what you meant by needing inspiration then. Yeah, but that's cool. So, what did you think so far?
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Post by The Big Daddy C-Master on Feb 9, 2015 5:01:15 GMT -5
I guess I misunderstood what you meant by needing inspiration then. Yeah, but that's cool. So, what did you think so far? Still sifting through it.
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Post by Darkstorm Zero on Feb 28, 2015 5:45:09 GMT -5
I got more & better screencaptures coming up
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Post by Darkstorm Zero on Feb 28, 2015 6:16:20 GMT -5
Ok, first up, we have a rather chopily put together comparative shots of the first Dragonborn, Miraak, unmasked, in comparison to Daenerys Targaryen, who (in my story) is his descendant. I do not know if Proboards will enable me to make images so big, as they compressed my last set of pics, so I'll include the link in the picture. Next is the Dragonborn Ulfgar Storm-Blade. I have some better shots of his Awakened Armor of War this time, and with and without the crown. These two has him with the Awakened Sword of the Divines drawn and ready. Next we have him wearing the Crown of the Dragonborn Emperors. Next up is the power of the Dragon Aspect. Dragon Aspect Intensified. Same as above, but with the Crown. Here is 2 from using the Dragons Fire Breath Shout. Next up is something very special. The Dragon Aspects ability to grant flight to it's wielder. These shots were taken while using the Intensified Dragon Aspect. And lastly, the Dragonborn's ultimate endgame power, the ability to transform into a massive Golden Dragon! I hope you guys enjoyed the show!
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Post by The Big Daddy C-Master on Feb 28, 2015 6:33:44 GMT -5
I like the quality of these much better. Very nice.
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Post by Darkstorm Zero on Feb 28, 2015 6:41:22 GMT -5
These ones I took during the daylight hours, under better light conditions. The Dragon Aspects don't look so bright and flashy, but you can see the guy wielding the power much better like this.
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Post by The Big Daddy C-Master on Feb 28, 2015 7:03:32 GMT -5
Fantastic work. 3 thumbs up!
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Post by Darkstorm Zero on Feb 28, 2015 7:19:58 GMT -5
Heh, I'm surprised you didn't comment about the flying mod Usually that's the first thing people ask about.
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Post by The Big Daddy C-Master on Feb 28, 2015 8:09:50 GMT -5
The flight aspect before the Golden Dragon? What are the stats on that dragon?
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Post by Darkstorm Zero on Feb 28, 2015 8:30:12 GMT -5
Yeah.
Stats? How do you mean stats?
Oh and I edited in a few new pics, and changed some others.
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Post by The Big Daddy C-Master on Feb 28, 2015 8:32:48 GMT -5
What can it do? How much health does he have? Etc.
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Post by Darkstorm Zero on Feb 28, 2015 8:41:43 GMT -5
Ah, well, since it is Ulfgar, he retains the use of all the shouts he has as a human, albeit beefed up considerably. Physically he is much, much stronger and more durable as a Dragon. Example - Alduin used his head to physically bust a hole in a stone tower during the attack on Helgen.
Now, they aren't particularly fast or agile on the ground, but Dragons rule the skies, and are unmatched there. However, physically, they are juggernaughts, and can tank blows that would easily fell a lesser creature, especially larger and more powerful dragons. They are also very adept at swimming.
If youwere to ask me where I would place Ulfgar's Dragon form in relation to other Dragons, I couldn't say yet, as I have yet to write up the feats for this form.
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Post by The Big Daddy C-Master on Feb 28, 2015 8:43:11 GMT -5
Any magic?
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Post by Darkstorm Zero on Feb 28, 2015 8:47:01 GMT -5
I think all Dragon Magic is linked to the use of the Thu'um. Check his list of shouts here.As for all the spells he has at his disposal as a human, that list is.... Much much longer.
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